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McClure’s Magazine Edition – MME
First American Edition – FAE
First American Edition with Edith Wharton’s Corrections – EWPFAE
First British Edition – FBE
[FAE 11]
link life to life in modern communities. It had no shops, no theatres, no lectures, no “business block”; only a church that was opened every other Sunday if the state of the roads permitted, and a library for which no new books had been bought for twenty years, and where the old ones mouldered undisturbed on the damp shelves. Yet Charity Royall had always been told that she ought to consider it a privilege that her lot had been cast in North Dormer. She knew that, compared to the place she had come from, North Dormer represented all the blessings of the most refined civilization [“civilization” in MSS (6), “civilization” in MME (8), “civilisation” in FBE (5)]. Everyone in the village [“place” in MSS, “place” in MME (8, Feb 1917), “village” in FBE (5)] had told her so ever since she had been brought there as a child. Even old Miss Hatchard had said to her, on a terrible occasion in her life: “My child, you must never cease to remember that it was Mr. Royall [“Mrs. Royall” in MSS (6), “Mr. Royall” in MME (8), “Mrs. Royall” in FBE (5)] who brought you down from the Mountain.”
She had been “brought down from the Mountain”; from the scarred cliff that lifted its sullen wall above the lesser slopes of Eagle Range, making a perpetual background of gloom to the lonely valley. The Mountain was a good fifteen miles away, but it rose so abruptly from the lower hills that it seemed almost to cast its shadow over North Dormer. And it was like a great magnet drawing the clouds and scattering them in storm across the valley. If ever, in the purest summer sky, there trailed a thread of vapour over North
