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From Wharton to McClure's to Appleton to Macmillan: Journey of "Summer" from Manuscript to Print

Complete Comparative Chart

Below is a Complete Comparative Chart of Major Editions of Summer: The First American Edition, Wharton’s Proofread Version of The First American Edition, and The First British Edition. Shorter lists based on different categories are available in the next few sections of this book. If you want to jump to a specific section, you can do that by clicking the hyperlinked section titles below:

Comparative Chart by Category: Punctuation
Comparative Chart by Category: Ellipsis
Comparative Chart by Category: Capitalization, Italicization, and Pluralization
Comparative Chart by Category: Spelling Conventions
Comparative Chart by Category: Words and Phrases
Comparative Chart by Category: Sentence
Comparative Chart by Category: Interface
Literary Analysis

No.	Chapter & Criteria	*Summer, First American Edition (FAE)*	*Summer, First American Edition with Wharton’s Corrections (EWPFAE)*	*Summer*, First British Edition (FBE)
	Ch 1 Capital	A GIRL came out of lawyer Royall’s house, . . . (7)		A GIRL came out of Lawyer Royall’s house, . . . (3)
	Ch 1 Spell Conv Punc	The springlike transparent sky shed a rain of silver sunshine on the roofs of the village, and on the pastures and larchwoods surrounding it. (7)		The spring-like transparent sky shed a rain of silver sunshine on the roofs of the village and on the pastures and larchwoods surrounding it. (3)
	Ch 1 Spell Conv Capital	. . . Norway spruces in front of the Hatchard gate, cast almost the only roadside shadow between lawyer Royall’s house . . . (7)		. . . Norway spruces in front of the Hatchard gate cast almost the only roadside shadow between Lawyer Royall’s house . . . (3)
	Ch 1 Capital	. . . the girl on lawyer Royall’s doorstep . . . (8)		. . . the girl on Lawyer Royall’s doorstep . . . (3)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . he wore city clothes, and that . . . (8)		. . . he wore “city clothes,” and that . . . (3)
	Ch 1 Word Change	. . . June afternoon its few able-bodied men are . . . (9)		. . . June afternoon its few able-bodied citizens are . . . (4)
	Ch 1 Punc	But about a year before, Mr. Miles, the new . . . (9)		But about a year before Mr. Miles, the new . . . (4)
	Ch 1 Spell Conv	. . . had been piled into a farm-waggon, driven . . . (9)		. . . had been piled into a farm-wagon, driven . . . (4)
	Ch 1 Word Del	. . . had not prevented her from understanding them . . . (10)		. . . had not prevented her understanding them . . . (4)
	Ch 1 Word Change	. . . had previously failed to excite. (10)		. . . had hitherto failed to excite. (4)
	Ch 1 Capital	. . . from lawyer Royall’s faded red . . . (10)		. . . from Lawyer Royall’s faded red . . . (4)
	Ch 1 Spell Conv	. . . blessings of the most refined civilization. (11)		. . . blessings of the most refined civilisation. (5)
	Ch 1 Punc Word Change	. . . occasion in her life: “My child, you must never cease to remember that it was Mr. Royall who brought you down from the Mountain.” (11)		. . . occasion in her life, “My child, you must never cease to remember that it was Mrs. Royall who brought you down from the Mountain.” (5)
	Ch 1 Word Change	. . . of gloom to the lonely valley . . . (11)		. . . of gloom to the lonely village . . . (5)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . aware of Annabel Balch of Springfield, . . . (12)		. . . aware of Annabel Balch, of Springfield, . . . (6)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . with a listless step she took off . . . (14)		. . . with a listless step, she took off . . . (6)
	Ch 1 Spell Conv	. . lace and a steel crochet hook . . . (14)		. . lace and a steel crochet-hook . . . (6)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . the long vault-like room, his hands . . . (14)		. . . the long, vault-like room, his hands . . . (7)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . asked in a pleasant abrupt voice; (15)		. . . asked in a pleasant, abrupt voice; (7)
	Ch 1 Capital	“Why, you know—” He broke off . . . (15)		“Why, you know—” he broke off . . . (7)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . thread of his remark, did not . . . (15)		. . . thread of his remark did not . . . (7)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . rejoined with a sigh: “I’m afraid I can’t help you much.” (15)		. . . rejoined with a sigh, “I’m afraid I can’t help you much.” (7)
	Ch 1 Word Change	. . . can’t dust all these books. (16)		. . . can’t dust all those books. (8)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . bewilderment was complete: the more . . . (17)		. . . bewilderment was complete; the more . . . (8)
	Ch 1 Para Break Interface	He laughed … again. “Haven’t you . . . room. (18)		He laughed . . . room. (two sections are put together as a single paragraph) (9)
	Ch 1 Punc	. . . a limp weakly book that . . . (18)		. . . a limp, weakly book that . . . (9)
	Ch 1 Punc Word Ins	. . . he said again. She knew . . . (19)		. . . he said again; and she knew . . . (9)
	Ch 2 Punc	. . . emerged was still empty: and after glancing up . . . (20)		. . . emerged was still empty; and after glancing up . . . (10)
	Ch 2 Punc	. . . the slope, tossed off her hat and hid her . . . (21)		. . . the slope, tossed off her hat, and hid her . . . (10)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	Today the sense of well-being . . . (21)		To-day the sense of well-being . . . (10)
	Ch 2 Punc Word Change	. . . intensified by her joy at escaping from . . . (21)		. . . intensified by the joy at escaping from . . . (10)
	Ch 2 Punc Word Del EWFAE & FBE (SAME)	. . . at intervals, “Uncle Tom’s Cabin,” or “Opening of a Chestnut Burr,” or Longfellow. (22)	. . . at intervals, “Uncle Tom’s Cabin,” or “Opening a Chestnut Burr,” or Longfellow. (22)	. . . at intervals, “Uncle Tom’s Cabin” or “Opening a Chestnut Burr,” or Longfellow. (11)
	Ch.2 Ellipsis	. . . like an injustice. . . . (22)		. . . like an injustice . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . his shortsighted eyes, . . . (22)		. . . his short-sighted eyes, . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . of the shortsighted, his smile . . . (22)		. . . of the short-sighted, his smile . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Capital Punc	. . . lawyer Royall was “the biggest man in North dormer”; (22)		. . . Lawyer Royall was “the biggest” man in North dormer; (11)
	Ch 2 Capital	. . . a sickly Crimson Rambler tied to . . . (23)		. . . a sickly crimson rambler tied to . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Punc	. . . a fan-shaped support, which Mr. Royall . . . (23)		. . . a fan-shaped support which Mr. Royall . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Word Change	. . . rows of potatoes strayed vaguely . . . (23)		. . . rows of potatoes straggled vaguely . . . (11)
	Ch 2 Word Ins	. . . has been told that she . . . (24)		. . . has been told afterward that she . . . (12)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . that was afterward to be hers. (24)		. . . that was afterwards to be hers. (12)
	Ch 2 Capital	. . . lawyer Royall was harsh . . . (24)		. . . Lawyer Royall was harsh . . . (12)
	Ch 2 Word Change	. . . commemorate Mr. Royall’s disinterestedness in “bringing her down” . . . (24)		. . . commemorate Mrs. Royall’s disinterestedness in “bringing her down” . . . (12)
	Ch 2 Word Change	. . . knew why he had come back . . . (24)		. . . knew why Lawyer Royall had come back . . . (12)
	Ch 2 Punc	. . . answered shortly, “You ain’t going,” and . . . (25)		. . . answered shortly: “You ain’t going,” and . . . (12)
	Ch 2 Punc	Therefore, when Miss Hatchard sent for . . . (25)		Therefore when Miss Hatchard sent for . . . (13)
	Ch 2 Punc	. . . said Charity harshly; and Miss Hatchard . . . (26)		. . . said Charity, harshly, and Miss Hatchard . . . (13)
	Ch.2 Ellipsis	“. . . always come to me. . . .” (27)		“. . . always come to me . . .” (13)
	Ch.2 Capital	. . . the Crimson Rambler and its fan . . . (27)		. . . the crimson rambler and its fan . . . (13)
	Ch.2 Sent Ins Word Change Punc	He wound up confidentially: “I was a damn fool . . . (28)		“After all,” he said confidentially, “I was a damn fool . . . (14)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . on the worn oilcloth . . . (28)		. . . on the worn oil-cloth . . . (14)
	Ch 2 Word Change	She was awakened by . . . (28)		She was wakened by . . . (14)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	“. . . have that key tonight.” (29)		“. . . have that key to-night.” (14)
	Ch.2 Sent Del	Her heart gave a startled plunge, but she continued to hold him back contemptuously. (29)		She continued to hold him back contemptuously. (14)
	Ch 2 Word Order	. . . turned slowly away from the door. . . (29)		. . . slowly turned away from the door. . . (14)
	Ch 2 Word Change	. . . ear to her keyhole she . . . (29)		. . . ear to the keyhole she . . . (14)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . stairs, and toward the kitchen . . . (29)		. . . stairs, and towards the kitchen . . . (14)
	Ch 2 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . the crash of the cupboard panel, but instead . . . (29)	. . . the crash of the cupboard panel. But instead . . . (29)	. . . the crash of the cupboard panel. But instead . . . (14-15)
	Ch 2 Punc Phrs Ins	. . . heard him, after an interval, unlock the door . . . (29)		. . . heard him unlock the door . . . (15)
	Ch 2 Section Break	. . . cold to the bone. (30) (uses double space to indicate break)		. . . cold to the bone. (15) (uses double space and a line of dots to indicate break)
	Ch 2 Sent Ins /Change	Charity’s heart grew cold. She understood that Miss Hatchard had no help to give her and that she would have to fight her way out of her difficulty alone. A deeper sense of isolation overcame her; she felt incalculably old. (31)		Charity’s heart grew cold. She understood that she must fight her way out of her difficulty alone, and a deeper sense of isolation overcame her. In that moment of readjustment she seemed to have grown incalculably old. (15)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . the selectmen of north dormer . . . (31)		. . . the select-men of north dormer . . . (16)
	Ch 2 Word Change	“. . . it was Mr. Royall who brought you down from the Mountain.” (31-32)		“. . . it was Mrs. Royall who brought you down from the Mountain.” (16)
	Ch 2 Word Ins	“. . . earn money for?” he asked. (32)		“. . . earn money for?” he asked at length. (16)
	Ch 2 Spell Conv	. . . and the selectmen to take . . . (33)		. . . and the select-men to take . . . (16)
	Ch 2 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	“See here,” he said at length as though utterance were difficult, “there’s something I’ve been wanting to say to you; I’d ought to have said it before. (33)	“See here,” he said at length, as though utterance were difficult, “there’s something I’ve been wanting to say to you; I’d ought to have said it before. (33)	“See here,” he said at length, as though utterance were difficult, “there’s something I’ve been wanting to say to you. I’d ought to have said it before. (17)
	Ch 2 Phrs Change	Or I’ll drive you down to Hepburn to the Justice, and get it done there. (33-34)		Or I’ll drive you down to Hepburn, to the Justice there. (17)
	Ch 2 Phrs Ins	“That’ll do—that’ll about do,” he said. (35)		“That’ll do—that’ll about do,” he said in a changed voice. (17)
	Ch 2 Phrs Del	. . . that Charity had been appointed librarian of the Hatchard Memorial at a salary of eight dollars a month, and . . . (35)		. . . that Charity had been appointed librarian of the Hatchard Memorial, and . . . (17)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . Mr. Royall’s “office” that he . . . (36)		. . . Mr. Royall’s office that he . . . (18)
	Ch 3 Para Break	. . . received his infrequent clients. Professional dignity . . . (36)		. . . received his infrequent clients. (paragraph break) Professional dignity . . . (18)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . under a different roof; and . . . (36)		. . . under a different roof, and . . . (18)
	Ch 3 Spell Conv	. . . two to the town-clerk, who sat . . . (36)		. . . two to the town clerk, who sat . . . (18)
	Ch 3 Spell Conv	. . . two selectmen leaning . . . (36)		. . . two select-men leaning . . . (18)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . leather, tar and coffee-beans. (37)		. . . leather, tar, and coffee-beans. (18)
	Ch 3 Word Change Punc	. . . spent either at the store or in driving about the country . . . represented, or in sitting at home reading Bancroft’s History of the United States and the speeches of Daniel Webster. (37)		. . spent either in the store, in driving about the country . . . represented, or in sitting at home reading Bancroft’s “History of the United States,” or the speeches of Daniel Webster. (18)
	Ch 3 Word Change	Charity suspected that . . . (38)		Charity imagined that . . . (19)
	Ch 3 Spell Conv	. . . her own defense than . . . (38)		. . . her own defence than . . . (19)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . to defend her: his humbled . . . (38)		. . . to defend her; his humbled . . . (19)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . shining super-Nettletons, where girls . . . (39)		. . . shining super-Nettletons where girls . . . (19)
	Ch 3 Ellipsis	. . . left the church. . . . (40)		. . . left the church . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . despised him; now deep . . . (40)		. . . despised him, now deep . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Ellipsis	. . . horrible old man. . . . (40)		. . . horrible old man . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Punc	The next day, when Mr. Royall came back to dinner, they faced . . . (40)		The next day when Mr. Royall came back to dinner they faced . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Phrs Change	. . . permitted the freest interchange of confidences. (40)		. . . permitted the completest freedom of speech. (20)
	Ch 3 Punc Word Change	. . . from the table, he looked back at Charity, who had . . . (40)		. . . from the table he looked back to Charity, who had . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Word Del	“I want to speak to you a minute,” he said; (41)		“I want to speak to you,” he said; (20)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . across the passage, wondering. (41)		. . . across the passage wondering. (20)
	Ch 3 Word Change	. . . in his black horse-hair armchair, and . . . (41)		. . . in his high-backed armchair, and . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Word Del	Charity’s smouldering resentment broke into . . . (41)		Charity’s resentment broke into . . . (20)
	Ch 3 Plural	. . . her happy recollection. (41)		. . . her happy recollections. (21)
	Ch 3 Word Del	. . . in the dreamy remembrance of young Harney’s visit . . . (42)		. . . in the remembrance of young Harney’s visit . . . (21)
	Ch 3 Word Ins	. . . told Miss Hatchard the books were in bad shape . . . (42)		. . . told Miss Hatchard that the books were in bad shape . . . (21)
	Ch 3 Sent Ins	. . . She got excited, and had . . . (42)		. . . She got excited, I presume, and had . . . (21)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . told me about that, and about the other . . . (42)		. . . told me about that and about the other . . . (21)
	Ch 3 Word Order	. . . she felt, without knowing what hurt her . . . (42-43)		. . . she felt, without what knowing hurt her . . . (21)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . unlocked the door and entered into . . . (44)		. . . unlocked the door, and entered into . . . (22)
	Ch 3 Punc	. . . long dingy rows of books . . . (44)		. . . long, dingy rows of books . . . (22)
	Ch 3 Spell Conv	. . . life’s cruelest discovery . . . (44)		. . . life’s cruellest discovery . . . (22)
	Ch 3 Punc	She did not cry; tears came hard . . . (45)		She did not cry: tears came hard . . . (22)
	Ch 4 Spell Conv	. . . I know the by-laws . . . (46)		. . . I know the bye-laws . . . (23)
	Ch 4 Punc	. . . know it is; I’m so sorry . . . (46)		. . . know it is. I’m so sorry . . . (23)
	Ch 4 Spell Conv	. . . this time tomorrow. (46)		. . . this time to-morrow. (23)
	Ch 4 Spell Conv	. . . to have some one to help . . . (49)		. . . to have someone to help . . . (24)
	Ch 4 Word Change	. . . the stern rosewood desk surmounted . . . (50)		. . . the grim rosewood desk surmounted . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Word Change	. . . the portrait of the young Honorius. (50)		. . . the effigy of the young Honorius. (25)
	Ch 4 Capital	. . . without blowing a hole in the mountain. (50)		. . . without blowing a hole in the Mountain. (25)
	Ch 4 Word Ins	. . . and turning back to her abruptly . . . (50)		. . . and turning to her abruptly . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Punc	. . . disarmed her: no one had . . . (50)		. . . disarmed her; no one had . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Punc	. . . she lives on trifles: I ought to have . . . (51)		. . . she lives on trifles; I ought to have . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Phrs Change Capital	. . . fact of having lived in Nettleton that made lawyer Royall . . . (51)		. . . fact of coming from Nettleton that made Lawyer Royall . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Phrs Change	. . . this young man had lived in bigger places than Nettleton . . . (51)		. . . this young man came from bigger places than Nettleton . . . (25)
	Ch 4 Spell Conv	. . . wait till tomorrow . . . (52)		. . . wait till to-morrow . . . (26)
	Ch 5 Word Change	. . . above a sunlit hollow . . . (53)		. . . above a sunlit valley . . . (27)
	Ch 5 Spell Conv	. . . on countless spruce-branches . . . (54)		. . . on countless spruce branches . . . (27)
	Ch 5 Word Change	. . . butterfly the sight of a man’s foot . . . (54)		. . . butterfly the vision of a man’s foot . . . (54)
	Ch 5 Capital	. . . link between the mountain and civilized folk . . . (55)		. . . link between the Mountain and civilized folk . . . (28)
	Ch 5 Word Change Ellipsis	. . . was to come up. . . . (56)		. . . wos to come up . . . (28)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . he had added philosophically, looking . . . (56)		. . . he had added, philosophically, looking . . . (28)
	Ch 5 Spell Conv	But today she . . . (56)		But to-day she . . . (28)
	Ch 5 Spell Conv	. . . below the cheekbones and the . . . (56)		. . . below the cheek-bones and the . . . (28)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . he said with his vague grin. (57)		. . . he said, with his vague grin. (29)
	Ch 5 Phrs Ins	“. . . these parts drawing pictures.” (57)		“. . . these parts drawing pictures of old houses.” (29)
	Ch 5 Word Ins	. . . offer to explain this statement. (57)		. . . offer to explain this unintelligible statement. (29)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . brown house, and go all over . . . (57)		. . . brown house and go all over . . . (29)
	Ch 5 Sent Ins	“Is it a fellow from the city?” he asked. (57)		He had given up the mechanical quest for tobacco. “Is it a fellow from the city?” he asked. (29)
	Ch 5 Punc Word Change	. . . Liff echoed incredulously. (58)		. . . Liff echoed, weakly laughing. (29)
	Ch 5 Punc	All I say is: he’s going . . . (58)		All I say is, he’s going . . . (29)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . trouble you, the Hyatts won’t. (58)		. . . trouble you—the Hyatts won’t. (29)
	Ch 5 Word Form	What d’you want . . . (58)		What’d you want . . . (29)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . call down: “I wouldn’t. . . (59)		. . . call down, “I wouldn’t. . . (30)
	Ch 5 Word Change	. . . like the woman she had . . . (60)		. . . like the witch-woman she had . . . (30)
	Ch 5 Word Change FBE did not follow EWPFAE	The thought brought him back to the central point in her mind . . . (60)	The thought brought her back to the central point in her mind . . . (60)	The thought brought him back to the central point in her mind . . . (30)
	Ch 5 Phrs Change	. . . he would abruptly pull up their horse . . . (61)		. . . he would suddenly hitch their horse . . . (31)
	Ch 5 Capital	. . . had hired of lawyer Royall. (61)		. . . had hired of Lawyer Royall. (31)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . been less apprehensive: Mr. Royall . . . (63)		. . . been less apprehensive; Mr. Royall . . . (32)
	Ch 5 Punc	. . . inside the house. And I . . . (64)		. . . inside the house; and I . . . (32)
	Ch 5 Phrs Change	. . . the Mountain thrust itself up menacingly against a yellow sunset. (64)		. . . the Mountain thrust up its black shoulder against a yellow sunset. (33)
	Ch 5 Ellipsis	. . . you’re so different. . . .” (67)		. . . you’re so different . . .” (34)
	Ch 5 Phrs Change	. . . blood bathed her to the forehead. (67)		. . . blood bathed her to the roots of her hair. (34)
	Ch 5 Spell Conv	“. . . take me tomorrow?” (67)		“. . . take me to-morrow?” (34)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . into pale green, and then . . . (68)		. . . into pale green and then . . . (35)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	had anyone of Lucius . . . (68)		had any one of Lucius . . . (35)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	. . . young man symbolized all his . . . (68)		. . . young man symbolised all his . . . (35)
	Ch 6 Word Change	. . . of a widowed sister, and . . . (68)		. . of a widowed sister-in-law, and . . . (35)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	. . . Mr. Royall consented. (69)		. . . Mr. Royall had consented. (35)
	Ch 6 Word Del Phrs Ins	. . . poorer than people knew. (69)		. . . poorer than was commonly supposed. (35)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	. . . but she knew he felt . . . (70)		. . . but she knew that he felt . . . (36)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	. . . but tonight it had . . . (70)		. . . but to-night it had . . . (36)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	. . . the selectmen look . . . (71)		. . . the select-men look . . . (36)
	Ch 6 Punc	“Yes, sir: right after it . . .” (72)		“Yes, sir; right after it . . .” (37)
	Ch 6 Capital	. . . I seen in court that looks . . . (72)		. . . I seen in Court that looks . . . (37)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . “Oh yes: there was a mother . . .” (73)		. . . “Oh yes; there was a mother . . .” (37)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	Mr. Royall’s was the only house where the young man could have been offered a decent hospitality. (75)		Mr. Royall’s was really the only house where the young man could have been offered a decent hospitality. (38)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	. . . than any one she had known; (76)		. . . than anyone she had known; (39)
	Ch 6 Spell Conv	. . . than usual today . . . (78)		. . . than usual to-day . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . he stood up and (78)		. . . he stood up, and . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Word Del	. . . in separate beads that . . . (79)		. . . in beads that . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Spell Error Spell Conv FBE followed EWPFAE (But following British spell conv, hyphen is removed from FBE)	. . . into the beach-woods . . . (79)	. . . into the beech-woods . . . (79)	. . . into the beechwoods . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Phrs Change	. . . reached the yoke of the hills . . . (79)		. . . reached the top . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Word Change	. . . more blue heights eddying . . . (79)		. . . more blue hills eddying . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	. . . away to the sky like . . . (79)		. . . away to the blue sky like . . . (40)
	Ch 6 Word Change Spell Conv	. . . of which bumblebees darted. (79)		. . . of which humble-bees darted. (40-41)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . on the air, and a flock . . . (79)		. . . on the air and a flock . . . (41)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . brown house; she did not . . . (80)		. . . brown house: she did not . . . (41)
	Ch 6 Phrs Change	. . . there was a little deserted house . . . (80)		. . . there was another house . . . (41)
	Ch 6 Punc Word Change	. . . her glance and smiled. “Is it that scrap of cloud . . . (80)		. . . her glance and smiled: “Is it that thread of cloud . . . (41)
	Ch 6 Punc	But anyhow, we’ll get . . . (81)		But anyhow we’ll get . . . (41)
	Ch 6 Para Break	. . . behind an outhouse. Harney jumped . . . (82)		. . . behind an outhouse. (paragraph break) Harney jumped . . . (42)
	Ch 6 Word Change	. . . on a furious gale, laying . . . (82)		. . . on a sudden gale, laying . . . (42)
	Ch 6 Word Change Plural	. . . hissing pools of every hollow. (82)		. . hissing pools of the hollows. (42)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	. . . for she moved about as noiselessly . . . (84)		. . . for she moved about as noiselessly as they . . . (43)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	. . . and dozed again, his head . . . (85)		. . . and dozed off again, his head . . . (43)
	Ch 6 Word Change	. . . the rain still streamed against the windows . . . (85)		. . . the torrents still streamed against the windows . . . (43)
	Ch 6 Word Change	She thought of the kitchen at Mr. Royall’s . . . (85)		She remembered of the kitchen at the red house . . . (44)
	Ch 6 Word Change FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . white spaniel on a moss-green border. (85)	. . . white spaniel in a moss-green border. (85)	. . . white spaniel on a moss-green border that lay before it. (44)
	Ch 6 Phrs Ins	. . . white spaniel on a moss-green border. (85)		. . . white spaniel on a moss-green border that lay before it. (44)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . Harney’s curiosity, and . . . (86)		. . . Harney’s curiosity and . . . (44)
	Ch 6 Punc	. . . his head drooped; but a . . . (86)		. . . his head drooped, but a . . . (44)
	Ch 6 Punc Phrs Ins	Harney untied the horse, and they drove off . . . (87)		Harney untied the horse and folded the horse-blanket about Charity, and they drove off . . . (45)
	Ch 6 Word Ins	Why did you put it back?” (88)		Why did you put it back again?” (45)
	Ch 6 Para Break	“Oh, Charity—” It was the first . . . (88) (paragraph break) “I ain’t ashamed . . . (88)		“Oh, Charity—” (paragraph break) It was the first . . . “I ain’t ashamed . . . (45)
	Ch 7 Punc	. . . trailing in late and neglected . . . (89)		. . . trailing in late, and neglected . . . (46)
	Ch 7 Word Change	. . . a thirst for letters . . . (90)		. . . a thirst for literature . . . (46)
	Ch 7 Punc	. . . part in their lives: Mr. Royall’s . . . (91)		. . . part in their lives; Mr. Royall’s . . . (47)
	Ch 7 Spell Conv	. . . The ginger-bread-coloured Baptist chapel . . . (92)		. . . The gingerbread-coloured Baptist chapel . . . (47)
	Ch 7 Phrs Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . and Miss Hatchard, always full of scruples about her scruples . . . (93)	. . . and Miss Hatchard, always full of scruples, and of scruples about her scruples . . . (93)	. . . and Miss Hatchard, always full of scruples, and of scruples about her scruples . . . (48)
	Ch 7 Spell Conv	. . . helped her to visualize . . . (96)		. . . helped her to visualise . . . (50)
	Ch 7 Plural	. . . lower bar of the railings . . . (97)		. . . lower bar of the railing . . . (50)
	Ch 7 Word Change	. . . she’s waiting for Mr. Harney.” (97)		. . . she’s watching for Mr. Harney.” (50)
	Ch 7 Word Ins	. . . a clump of lilies in . . . (99)		. . . a clump of June lilies in . . . (51)
	Ch 7 Punc	. . . length of the village, and . . . (100)		. . . length of the village and . . . (52)
	Ch 7 Punc	. . . sudden discouragement, or distaste for his work and . . . (102)		. . . sudden discouragement or distaste for his work, and . . . (53)
	Ch 7 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . sudden discouragement, or distaste for his work and . . . (102)	. . . sudden discouragement, or distaste for his work, and . . . (102)	. . . sudden discouragement or distaste for his work, and . . . (53)
	Ch 7 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . opened the window and . . . (104)	. . . opened the window, and . . . (104)	. . . opened the window; and . . . (54)
	Ch 7 Punc FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . at her side on . . . (104)	. . . at her side, on . . . (104)	. . . at her side on . . . (54)
	Ch 7 Word Del	. . . the sudden change in . . . (105)		. . . the change in . . . (54)
	Ch 7 Italicize	. . . thing that did happen . . . (105)		. . . thing that did happen . . . (54)
	Ch 7 Punc Plural FBE followed EWFAE	there were others, worse endings that . . . (106)	there were other worse endings that . . . (106)	there were other worse endings that . . . (54)
	Ch 8 Para Break	She took it and went up. (Not sure if single or double space because the next para begins in page 109). The morning hours of the next day . . . (108-109)		She took it and went up. (Double space) The morning hours of the next day . . . (56)
	Ch 8 Punc	. . . Harney had already left; but . . . (109)		. . . Harney had already left, but . . . (56)
	Ch 8 Word Change	. . . last effort of indifference . . . (110)		. . . last effort at indifference . . . (57)
	Ch 8 Spell Conv	. . . his one offense he had . . . (110)		. . . his one offence he had . . . (57)
	Ch 8 Punc	. . . to leave his veins and . . . (111)		. . . to leave his veins, and . . . (57)
	Ch 8 Spell Conv	. . . instinct of self-defense awoke . . . (111)		. . . instinct of self-defence awoke . . . (58)
	Ch 8 Word Del	“You lost girl . . . you . . . you . . . Oh, my God . . . (112)		“You lost girl . . . you . . . Oh, my God . . . (58)
	Ch 8 Word Del	. . . head bowed down like . . . (112)		. . . head bowed like . . . (58)
	Ch 8 Italicize	. . . trouble to lie to you? (113)		. . . trouble to lie to you? (58)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . God sees me, I have. . . .” (113)		. . . God sees me, I have . . .” (58)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . word pass between us. . . . (113)		. . . word pass between us . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Word Del	. . . and the other people . . . (114)		. . . and the other low people . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Punc	“But, then—if he wasn’t . . . (114)		“But then—if he wasn’t . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Punc	. . . got to know, to stop . . . (114)		. . . got to know to stop . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . I’d come after him. . . .” (115)		. . . I’d come after him . . .” (59)
	Ch 8 Word Ins	. . . the last to want people to talk . . . (115)		. . . the last to want envious people to talk . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . but they won’t. . . . (115)		. . . but they won’t . . . (59)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . to come out again. . . . (115)		. . . to come out again . . . (60)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . find an opening. . . . (116)		. . . find an opening . . . (60)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . Hepburn or Nettleton. . . .” (116)		. . . Hepburn or Nettleton . . .” (60)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . look here. . . . (117)		. . . look here . . . (61)
	Ch 8 Word Ins	. . . to take him to Hepburn . . . (118)		. . . to take him down to Hepburn . . . (61)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . won’t be long deciding. . . . (118)		. . . won’t be long deciding . . . (61)
	Ch 8 Punc	. . . had happened now; something . . . (118)		. . . had happened now: something . . . (61)
	Ch 8 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . she pictured him, as she had seen him the night before, . . . (120)	. . . she pictured him as she had seen him the night before, . . . (120)	. . . she pictured him as she had seen him the night before, . . . (62)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . to tell you. . . . (121)		. . . to tell you . . . (63)
	Ch 8 Ellipsis	. . . less lonely. . . . (121)		. . . less lonely . . . (63)
	Ch 8 Word Change Ellipsis	. . . by and by. . . .” (121)		. . . by and bye . . .” (63)
	Ch 8 Word Change	. . . she arose in the . . . (122)		. . . she rose in the . . . (63)
	Ch 8 Letter Style	. . . a pocket-diary. (Paragraph break and letter style) DEAR CHARITY: . . . (123)		. . . a pocket-diary. “Dear Charity . . . (No paragraph break and letter is part of the running paragraph) (63)
	Ch 9 Word Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . and cherry-coloured lining . . . (124)	. . . and a cherry-coloured lining . . . (124)	. . . and a cherry-coloured lining . . . (64)
	Ch 9 Spell Conv	. . . I recognized it . . . (125)		. . . I recognised it . . . (64)
	Ch 9 Ellipsis	. . . as anything to dying. . . .” (125)		. . . as anything to dying . . .” (64)
	Ch 9 Ellipsis	. . . Julia had vanished. . . . (126)		. . . Julia had vanished . . . (65)
	Ch 9 Spell Conv	. . . the silvery luster preceding a hot . . . (126)		. . . the silvery lustre preceding a hot . . . (65)
	Ch 9 Phrs Ins	. . . her new hat carefully wrapped up, and . . . (127)		. . . her hat carefully wrapped up in her handkerchief, and . . . (66)
	Ch 9 Word Change	. . . but Harney, except when he . . . (129)		. . . but Harney, save when he . . . (66)
	Ch 9 Plural FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . softened the inflection of his voice . . . (130)	. . . softened the inflections of his voice . . . (130)	. . . softened the inflections of his voice . . . (67)
	Ch 9 Punc Conv	. . . “Just starting for Greytop;” (131)		. . . “Just starting for Greytop”; (68)
	Ch 9 Capital	. . . a fireman’s band . . . (131)		. . . a Fireman’s band . . . (68)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . the Merry Widow while they . . . (131)		. . . the “Merry Widow” while they . . . (68)
	Ch 9 Spell Error Or Spell Conv (?)	. . . into a waggonette streaming with . . . (132)		. . . into a wagonette streaming with . . . (68)
	Ch 9 Spell Conv	. . . on drug-stores gushing from . . . (133)		. . . on drugstores gushing from . . . (68)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . were closed offered, through wide . . . (133)		. . . were closed offered through wide . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . or tiers of fancy-goods in . . . (133)		. . . or tiers of “fancy-goods” in . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Word Change	. . . and turned in at a small . . . (134)		. . . and turned into a small . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Word Del Punc Word Order	. . . background of dark blue velvet, pins, rings and brooches glittered . . . (134)		. . . background of blue velvet, brooches, rings, and pins glittered . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . he asked leaning over . . . (134)		. . . he asked, leaning over . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Ellipsis	“I don’t know. . . .” (134)		“I don’t know . . .” (69)
	Ch 9 Spell Conv	. . . the lily of the valley was . . . (134)		. . . the lily-of-the-valley was . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Word Del Word Change	. . . She stood staring down a row . . . (135)		. . . She stared down a row . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . he rejoined her and slipped . . . (135)		. . . he rejoined her, and slipped . . . (69)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . presents from their fellows, and was . . . (135)		. . . presents from their “fellows,” and was . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Ellipsis	. . . one given to her. . . . (135)		. . . one given to her . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Word Del	. . . party of showy-looking girls were . . . (135)		. . . party of girls were . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Word Change FBE followed EWPFAE	That “somewhere else” turned out— (137)	The “somewhere else” turned out— (137)	The “somewhere else” turned out— (70)
	Ch 9 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . in a back street that called . . . (137)	. . . in a back street, that called . . . (137)	. . . in a back street, that called . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . zinnias and petunias and a big . . . (137)		. . . zinnias and petunias, and a big . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . the next yard. (137)		. . . the next “yard.” (71)
	Ch 9 Spell Conv	. . . but pleasant looking, who . . . (137)		. . . but pleasant-looking, who . . . (70)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . and quiet; and, from . . . (138)		. . . and quiet; and from . . . (71)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . to do next she was . . . (138)		. . . to do next, she was . . . (71)
	Ch 9 Word Change Word Ins	. . . the Lake, where she had not been taken on her former visit . . . (138)		. . . the Lake, which she had not been taken to on her former visit . . . (71)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . when he answered, “Oh . . . (138)		. . . when he answered: “Oh . . . (71)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . warm brow, said gaily, “Come along . . . (138-139)		. . . warm brow, said gaily: “Come along . . . (71)
	Ch 9 Plural	. . . the hundreds of hot sallow candy-munching faces. . . (139)		. . . the hundred of hot sallow candy-munching faces. . . (72)
	Ch 9 Punc	. . . what was happening, Harney . . . (140)		. . . what was happening Harney . . . (72)
	Ch 9 Word Ins FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . I’ll run you out to see the ball-game . . . (140)	. . . I’ll run you out first to see the ball-game . . . (140)	. . . I’ll run you out to see the ball-game . . . (72)
	Ch 9 Ellipsis	. . . across the front. . . .” (140)		. . . across the front . . .” (72)
	Ch 10 Punc FBE followed EWFAE	. . . from the darkness and again . . . (142)	. . . from the darkness, and again . . . (142)	. . . from the darkness, and again . . . (73)
	Ch 10 Spell Conv	. . . only eight seventy-five. (142)		. . . only eight-seventy-five. (73)
	Ch 10 Ellipsis	. . . for his ring. . . . (143)		. . . for his ring . . . (74)
	Ch 10 Punc Word Ins FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . a big performance like this, illuminated boats, . . . (143)	. . . a big performance like this: illuminated boats, . . . (143)	. . . a big performance like this. And illuminated boats, . . . (74)
	Ch 10 Punc	. . . the Lake, too?” (143)		. . . the Lake too?” (74)
	Ch 10 Phrs Change	. . . wearing badges of secret societies, with . . . (145)		. . . wearing Masonic badges, with . . . (75)
	Ch 10 Spell Conv	. . . troop had recognized her . . . (146)		. . . troop had recognised her . . . (75)
	Ch 10 Punc Phrs Ins	. . . curtains of darkness were descending, and in the intervals of eclipse the voices of the crowds . . . (146)		. . . curtains of darkness were descending more and more thickly; and in the intervals of eclipse the voices of the crowds . . . (75)
	Ch 10 Capital	. . . swept the Lake. (147)		. . . swept the lake. (76)
	Ch 10 Punc	. . . she heard someone say, “You wait . . . (147)		. . . she heard someone say: “You wait . . . (76)
	Ch 10 Punc	. . . bearing the inscription, “Washington . . . (148)		. . . bearing the inscription: “Washington . . . (76)
	Ch 10 Punc	. . . erect, solemn and gigantic . . . (148)		. . . erect, solemn, and gigantic . . . (76)
	Ch 10 Punc	A long “Oh-h-h” burst from . . . (148)		A long, “Oh-h-h” burst from . . . (76)
	Ch 10 Ellipsis	. . . up into the stars. . . . (148)		. . . up into the stars . . . (76)
	Ch 10 Plural	. . . holding up his arm caught her . . . (149)		. . . holding up his arms caught her . . . (77)
	Ch 10 Word Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . as the gang-plank lowered from . . . (150)	. . . as the gang-plank was lowered from . . . (150)	. . . as the gang-plank was lowered from . . . (77)
	Ch 10 Word Form	“. . . Here’s grandpa’s little daughter come to take him home!” (150)		“. . . Here’s gran’pa’s little treasure come to take him home!” (77)
	Word Change FBE did not follow EWPFAE	“. . . Here’s grandpa’s little daughter come to take him home!” (150)	“. . . Here’s grandpa’s little darling come to take him home!” (150)	“. . . Here’s gran’pa’s little treasure come to take him home!” (77)
	Ch 10 Word Change	. . . by the hand-rail in . . . (150)		. . . on the hand-rail in . . . (78)
	Ch 10 Word Change	. . . wore a secret society emblem . . . (150)		. . . wore a Masonic emblem . . . (78)
	Ch 10 Punc	. . . blotches of anger and lips . . . (151)		. . . blotches of anger, and lips . . . (78)
	Ch 10 Word Ins	. . . had seen him, as she went up to bed . . . (152)		. . . had seen him, often enough, as she went up to bed . . . (78)
	Ch 10 Punc	“I said, ‘You—damn—whore!’ ” (152)		“I said: you—damn—whore!” (79)
	Ch 11 Word Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . what they said to each other, during . . . (154)	. . . what they had said to each other, during . . . (154)	. . . what they had said to each other during . . . (80)
	Ch 11 Punc	. . . what they said to each other, during . . . (154)		. . . what they had said to each other during . . . (80)
	Ch 11 Punc	Charity knew that, although . . . (157)		Charity knew that although . . . (81)
	Ch 11 Punc	. . . would not last long; in another . . . (157)		. . . would not last long: in another . . . (81)
	Ch 11 Punc Spell Conv	. . . old man apostrophizing her in . . . (158)		. . . old man’s apostrophising her in . . . (82)
	Ch 11 Word Change	. . . she had before supposed . . . (158)		. . . she had then supposed . . . (82)
	Ch 11 Spell Conv Punc Sent Ins	From under her pincushion she took the library key, and laid it in full view; then she felt at the back of a drawer for the blue brooch that Harney had given her. She would not have dared to wear it openly at North Dormer, but now she fastened it on her bosom as if it were a talisman to protect her in her flight. (158-159)		From under her pin-cushion she took the library key, and laid it in full view, then she felt at the back of a drawer for the blue brooch that Harney had given her, and she put it in her bosom, beneath her dress. (82)
	Ch 11 Ellipsis	. . . talking to old Mrs. Sollas. . . . (159)		. . . talking to old Mrs. Sollas . . . (82)
	Ch 11 Punc	. . . that would have given her independence in a strange place, and she knew . . . (159)		. . . that would have given her independence in a strange place; and she knew . . . (82)
	Ch 11 Plural	. . . all exchange of confidence between them had been impossible . . . (159)		. . . all exchange of confidences between them had been impossible . . . (82)
	Ch 11 Punc	. . . a large sign bearing the inscription, “Gospel Tent.” (161)		. . . a large sign bearing the inscription: “Gospel Tent.” (83)
	Ch 11 Word Ins	. . . but a young man in a black alpaca coat, . . . (161)		. . . but a fat young man in a black alpaca coat, . . . (161)
	Ch 11 Punc	“Oh, Sister, don’t speak blasphemy. . . .”		“Oh, Sister, don’t speak blasphemy . . .”
	Ch 11 Word Ins	. . . and climbing into the heart of the forest. (162)		. . . and climbing up into the heart of the forest. (84)
	Ch 11 Punc Word Change	“. . . not far from here; and the young man who is running the Gospel tent picked them up just as I was riding by.” (164)		“. . . not far from here: and the young man who is running the Gospel tent picked them up just as I was driving by.” (85)
	Ch 11 Word Del FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . in the sudden relief of her release from lonely pain, . . . (165)	. . . in the relief of her release from lonely pain, . . . (165)	. . . in the sudden relief of her release from lonely pain, . . . (85)
	Ch 11 Punc	. . . answered gently: “Very well: let’s go the other way, then.” (165)		. . . answered gently: “Very well; let’s go the other way, then.” (85)
	Ch 11 Spell Conv	. . . sun-bleached to a ghostly gray––stood in an . . . (166)		. . . sun-bleached to a ghostly grey––stood in an . . . (86)
	Ch 11 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . same wan silvery tint; the house . . . (166)	. . . same wan silvery tint: the house . . . (166)	. . . same wan silvery tint: the house . . . (86)
	Ch 11 Punc Ellipsis	. . . one has to make allowances. . . . He’d been drinking. . . .” (168)		. . . one has to make allowances. He’d been drinking . . .” (87)
	Ch 11 Punc	“I know all that, too. . . .” (168)		“I know all that too. . . .” (87)
	Ch 11 Ellipsis	“Hadn’t wanted me to be like those other girls. . . .” (168)		“Hadn’t wanted me to be like those other girls . . .” (87)
	Ch 11 Ellipsis	“So’s ’t he wouldn’t have to go out. . . .” (168)		“So’s’t he wouldn’t have to go out . . .” (87)
	Ch 11 Punc Ellipsis	“. . . feel about me,” she broke out, “. . . telling you such things. . . .” (169)		“. . . feel about me,” she broke out . . . “telling you such things . . .” (87)
	Ch 11 Para Break	. . . as he held her against it. “Kiss me again––like last night,” . . . (169) (two separate paragraphs)		. . . as he held her against it. “Kiss me again––like last night,” . . . (87) (two paragraphs are combined)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	That form of sentimental decentralization was . . . (170)		That form of sentimental decentralisation was . . . (88)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	“. . . all the old names. . . .” (171)		“. . . all the old names . . .” (88)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . making our garlands of evergreen. . . . (171)		. . . making our garlands of evergreen . . . (88)
	Ch 12 Italicize	. . . idea of its all being home-made, don’t you? (171)		. . . idea of its all being home-made, don’t you? (88)
	Ch 12 Punc	. . . foreign talent: my young cousin Lucius Harney, the architect . . . (171)		. . . foreign talent: my young cousin, Lucius Harney, the architect. . . (88)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	. . . usually carried her half-way back across the hall, leaving the girls to return to . . . (173)		. . . usually carried her halfway back across the hall, leaving the girls to return to . . . (89)
	Ch 12 Word Change	. . . garlands for the procession was the last . . . (173)		. . . garlands for the proscenium was the last . . . (89)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	She had nothing further to hear from Mr. Royall. (174)		She had nothing farther to hear from Mr. Royall. (90)
	Ch 12 Punc	. . . it was not so much because of that as because it was Harney’s wish. (175)		. . . it was not so much because of that, as because it was Harney’s wish. (90)
	Ch 12 Word Change	The hemlock garland she was wearing fell to her knees and she sat in a kind of trance. (176)		The hemlock garland she was weaving fell to her knees and she sat in a kind of trance. (91)
	Ch 12 Plural Ellipsis	. . . she was to take part in the “exercises”––but she had no time just then to fix her mind on such matters. . . . (178)		. . . she was to take part in the “exercise”––but she had no time just then to fix her mind on such matters . . . (92)
	Ch 12 Punc Word Ins FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . with an earthenware jar holding a big bunch of wild asters, two canvas chairs stood near by, . . . (179)	. . . with an earthenware jar holding a big bunch of wild asters. Two canvas chairs stood near by, . . . (179)	. . . with an earthenware jar holding a big bunch of wild asters; two canvas chairs stood near by, . . . (92)
	Ch 12 Word Ins	. . . canvas chairs stood near by, and in one corner was a mattress with a Mexican blanket over it. (179)		. . . canvas chairs stood near by, and in one corner was a mattress with a Mexican blanket thrown over it. (92)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . bell a long way down the road. . . . (179)		. . . bell a long way down the road . . . (93)
	Ch 12 Phrs Ins Punc	With part of what was left of her savings she had hired a bicycle for a month, and every day . . . (181)		With what was left of the money Mr. Royall had given her she had hired a bicycle for a month; and every day . . . (93)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . she went about among could see her. . . . (182)		. . . she went about among could see her . . . (94)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	. . . the little house turned gray and spectral . . . (183)		. . . the little house turned grey and spectral . . . (94)
	Ch 12 Punc	. . . gave her a sense of hidden menace: it was . . . (183)		. . . gave her a sense of hidden menace; it was . . . (94)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . watch in vain for her lover. . . . (183)		. . . watch in vain for her lover . . . (95)
	Ch 12 Word Change	. . . his eyes were laughing in hers. (183)		. . . his eyes were laughing into hers. (95)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	“. . . drive down to Creston to meet someone who has come . . .” (184)		“. . . drive down to Creston to meet some one who has come . . .” (95)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	. . . at the Town Hall tomorrow: I didn’t know till it . . . (184)		. . . at the Town Hall to-morrow: I didn’t know till it . . . (95)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	“Tomorrow I shall only see you from far off,” Harney continued. (185)		“To-morrow I shall only see you from far off,” Harney continued. (95)
	Ch 12 Spell Conv	A late moon was rising, full orbed and fiery, turning the mountain ranges from fluid gray to a massive blackness, . . . (185-186)		A late moon was rising, full-orbed and fiery, turning the mountain ranges from fluid grey to a massive blackness, . . . (96)
	Ch 12 Phrs Change	Charity had spent more than she could afford on the dress, which . . . (187)		Charity had spent her last penny on the dress, which . . . (97)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . when she married Tom Fry. . . . (187)		. . . when she married Tom Fry . . . (97)
	Ch 12 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . all came from the people she worked for; there could be no doubt that the white slippers were Annabel Balch’s. . . . (188)	. . . all came from the people she worked for. There could be no doubt that the white slippers were Annabel Balch’s. . . . (188)	. . . all came from the people she worked for. There could be no doubt that the white slippers were Annabel Balch’s . . . (97)
	Ch 12 Ellipsis	. . . there could be no doubt that the white slippers were Annabel Balch’s. . . . (188)		There could be no doubt that the white slippers were Annabel Balch’s . . . (97)
	Ch 13 Punc	As Charity marched into it third in the white . . . (190)	As Charity marched into it, third in the white . . . (190)	As Charity marched into it, third in the white . . . (98)
	Ch 12 Punc FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . the green carpeted stage toward which she was moving; and of the unfamiliar faces . . . (190)	. . . the green carpeted stage toward which she was moving and of the unfamiliar faces . . . (190)	. . . the green carpeted stage toward which she was moving, and of the unfamiliar faces . . . (98)
	Ch 13 Word Change	. . . who had come up from Nettleton to play the harmonium . . . (190)		. . . who had come up from Hepburn to play the harmonium . . . (98)
	Ch 13 Punc Word Order FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . who had come up from Nettleton to play the harmonium and sat behind it, his conductor’s eye running over the fluttered girls. (190)	. . . who had come up from Nettleton to play the harmonium and sat behind it running his conductor’s eye over the fluttered girls. (190)	. . . who had come up from Hepburn to play the harmonium and sat behind it running his conductor’s eye over the fluttered girls. (98)
	Ch 13 Punc	He prayed energetically and briefly and then retired, . . . (191)		He prayed energetically and briefly, and then retired, . . . (98)
	Ch 13 Word Ins	His frock-coat had been carefully brushed . . . (191)		His black frock-coat had been carefully brushed . . . (98)
	Ch 13 Punc	. . . illustrious men, including the obligatory tribute to Honorius Hatchard, drifted past . . . (192)		. . . illustrious men, (including the obligatory tribute to Honorius Hatchard), drifted past . . . (99)
	Ch 13 Punc	. . . sat just below the desk, supported by Mrs. Miles . . . (192)		. . . sat just below the desk supported by Mrs. Miles . . . (99)
	Ch 13 Spell Conv	. . . or held forth to the selectmen about the stove . . . (193)		. . . or held forth to the select-men about the stove . . . (99)
	Ch 13 Spell Conv	Today his inflections were richer . . . (193)		To-day his inflections were richer . . . (99)
	Ch 13 Spell Conv	“. . . who have returned here today, to take . . .” (193)		“. . . who have returned here to-day, to take . . .” (99)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	“. . . I am one of those, as many of you know. . . . (193)		“. . . I am one of those, as many of you know . . . (99-100)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	“. . . they may come back for good. . . .” (194)		“. . . they may come back for good . . .” (100)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . or just for indifference. . . . (194)		. . . or just for indifference . . . (100)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . back to them for their good. . . . And to do . . . (195)		. . . back to them for their good . . . And to do . . . (100)
	Ch 13 Punc	. . . ‘I’m glad I’m here.’ Believe me . . . (195)		. . . ‘I’m glad I’m here––’ Believe me . . . (100)
	Ch 13 Spell Conv	. . . Mr. Miles saying to someone near him: . . . (195)		. . . Mr. Miles saying to some one near him: . . . (101)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . Charity began again to seach for Harney. . . . (196)		. . . Charity began again to seach for Harney . . . (101)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . something her neighbour had been whispering to her. . . . (196)		. . . something her neighbour had been whispering to her . . . (101)
	Ch 13 Spell Conv	Someone came forward to replace the fallen branch, . . . (196)		Some one came forward to replace the fallen branch, . . . (101)
	Ch 13 Word Del Word Form Phrs Ins	. . . involved in complicated relations––but she felt it all to be so far beyond her understanding . . . (197)		. . . involved in complications––but she felt it all the time to be so far beyond her understanding . . . (101)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . it could not buy more than a few moments. . . . (198)		. . . it could not buy more than a few moments . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . the very centre of her confused sensations. . . . (198)		. . . the very centre of her confused sensations . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Word Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . and then deadly apprehension. (198)	. . . and then a deadly apprehension. (198)	. . . and then a deadly apprehension. (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . swept back on her in a glare of fear. . . . (198)		. . . swept back on her in a glare of fear . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Punc	. . . look away from her guardian, and became aware . . . (199)		. . . look away from her guardian and became aware . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . floated through her bewildered brain. . . . (199)		. . . floated through her bewildered brain . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . harvest of hallowed memories. . . . (199)		. . . harvest of hallowed memories . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis	. . . your thoughts will prayerfully return. . . . (199)		. . . your thoughts will prayerfully return . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Punc	. . . O Lord, in times to come, in all its homely sweetness . . . (199)		. . . O Lord, in times to come in all its homely sweetness . . . (102)
	Ch 13 Ellipsis Punc	“Auld Lang Syne.” . . . Charity stared straight ahead of her and then, dropping her flowers, fell face downward at Mr. Royall’s feet. (199)		“Auld Lang Syne” . . . Charity stared straight ahead of her, and then, dropping her flowers, fell face downward at Mr. Royall’s feet. (103)
	Ch 14 Capital Chapter Beginning	NORTH DORMER’S celebration naturally included . . . (200)		NORTH Dormer’s celebration naturally included . . . (104)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	. . . had gone on and on. . . . (200)		. . . had gone on and on . . . (104)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv Ellipsis	. . . and everyone said afterward that something ought to have been done to ventilate the hall. . . . (201)		. . . and every one said afterward that something ought to have been done to ventilate the hall . . . (104)
	Ch 14 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . she feared to stay away, she had sprung . . . (201)	. . . she feared to stay away––she had sprung . . . (201)	. . . she feared to stay away––she had sprung . . . (104)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	. . . she was whirling about the room with him. . . . (202)		. . . she was whirling about the room with him . . . (105)
	Ch 14 Punc	The sense of hastiness was gone from her and every moment . . . (203)		The sense of hastiness was gone from her, and every moment . . . (105)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	. . . watching for the first white star. . . . (203)		. . . watching for the first white star . . . (105)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	. . . Harney passing the window against the sunset. . . . (203)		. . . Harney passing the window against the sunset . . . (105)
	Ch 14 Punc	The door opened, and Mr. Royall walked into the room. (204)		The door opened and Mr. Royall walked into the room. (106)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv	Purple asters and red-maple-leaves filled the jar on the table; . . . (204)		Purple asters and red maple-leaves filled the jar on the table; . . . (106)
	Ch 14 Punc	. . . she had been waiting for happened; the door opened again . . . (206)		. . . she had been waiting for happened: the door opened again . . . (107)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv	“Is this your house?” he inquired. (206)		“Is this your home?” he enquired. (107)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv	I believe she considers herself free to some and go as she pleases, without any questions from anyone. (207)		I believe she considers herself free to some and go as she pleases, without any questions from any one. (107)
	Ch 14 Punc	. . . not in Eagle County, anyhow. (207)		. . . not in Eagle County anyhow. (108)
	Ch 14 Word Change	I saw her there sixteen years ago, when I went to bring this child down. (208)		I saw her there fifteen years ago, when I went to bring this child down. (108)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	“. . . have left her in the kennel she came from. . . .” (208)		“. . . have left her in the kennel she came from . . .” (108)
	Ch 14 Punc Ellipsis	. . . a frown on his face: he was twirling . . . from a loop of string. . . . (208)		. . . a frown on his face; he was twirling . . . from a loop of string . . . (108)
	Ch 14 Phrs Change Word Del	He did not look again at the young people: they saw him feel his way to the door and fumble for the latch; and then he went out into the darkness. (208)		He did not look again at the lovers: they saw him feel his way to the door and fumble for the latch; then he went out into the darkness. (108)
	Ch 14 Ellipsis	“. . . that this should have happened. . . .” (209)		“. . . that this should have happened . . .” (108)
	Ch 14 Punc	“No,” she said. “I forgot––”		“No,” she said, “I forgot––” (109)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv	. . . took down a tin candle-stick and lite the candle; (210)		. . . took down a tin candlestick and lite the candle; (109)
	Ch 14 Spell Conv	. . . against the empty window-frame and put the candle on the table. (210)		. . . against the empty window frame and put the candle on the table. (109)
	Ch 14 Word Del Plural Word Ins	It threw a queer shadow on his frowning forehead, and made the smile on his lips a grimace. (211)		It threw queer shadows on his frowning forehead, and made the smile on his lips like a grimace. (109)
	Ch 15 Punc	. . . he intended to come back; her doubts were . . . (212)		. . . he intended to come back: her doubts were . . . (111)
	Ch 15 Punc Ellipsis	But she seldom looked ahead; each day was so rich that it absorbed her. . . . (213)		But she seldom looked ahead: each day was so rich that it absorbed her . . . (111)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . three freedom of her spirit drooped. . . . (213)		. . . three freedom of her spirit drooped . . . (111)
	Ch 15 Punc	Harney had not fixed any date for his return; he had said he would have to look about first, and settle things. (213)		Harney had not fixed any date for his return: he had said he would have to look about first and settle things. (111)
	Ch 15 Punc	. . . she got out a sheet of paper, and sat looking at it, and trying to think what to say; but she had the feeling . . . (213)		. . . she got out a sheet of paper and sat looking at it, and trying to think what to say, but she had the feeling . . . (111)
	Ch 15 Punc Spell Conv	Coming from immeasurable distances and having lost most of its meaning on the way; and in reply she sent him a coloured post-card of Creston Falls, . . . (214)		Coming from immeasurable distances, and having lost most of its meaning on the way; and in reply she sent him a coloured postcard of Creston Falls, . . . (112)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . except to be glad he was not there. . . . (215)		. . . except to be glad he was not there . . . (112)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . I seen her with those gaugings. . . .” (216)		“. . . I seen her with those gaugings . . .” (113)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	. . . Charity inquired with an inner start of apprehension. (216)		. . . Charity enquired with an inner start of apprehension. (113)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . from what she said. . . . Didn’t you know?” (217)		“. . . from what she said . . . Didn’t you know?” (113)
	Ch 15 Word Form (Contr) FBE followed EWPFAE	“It would not make it true if I did . . . (218)	“It wouldn’t make it true if I did . . . (218)	“It wouldn’t make it true if I did . . . (114)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“That’s so. . . . (218)		“That’s so . . . (114)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . she wouldn’t dance any. . . .” (218)		“. . . she wouldn’t dance any . . .” (114)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . or I’ll hate you too. . . .” (219)		“. . . or I’ll hate you too . . .” (114)
	Ch 15 Para Break /Space	. . . she fell sobbing across her bed. (Regular/single space) The long storm was followed by . . . (219)		. . . she fell sobbing across her bed. (Double space) The long storm was followed by . . . (114)
	Ch 15 Punc Word Change	The long storm was followed by a north-west gale, and when it was over, the hills took . . . (219)		The long storm was followed by a north-west gale, and when it was over the woods took . . . (114)
	Ch 15 Word Del	. . . the uselessness of struggling against the circumstances. (220)		. . . the uselessness of struggling against circumstances. (115)
	Ch 15 Punc	She had never known how to adapt herself; she . . . (220)		She had never known how to adapt herself: she . . . (115)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	. . . imagine what a civilized person would have . . . (221)		. . . imagine what a civilised person would have . . . (115)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . too unequally pitted against unknown forces. . . . (221)		. . . too unequally pitted against unknown forces . . . (115)
	Ch 15 Letter Style	FAE has all the letters separated with double space from the main paragraph and in a proper format of a letter. No quotations marks. (221)		In FBE letters are part of a running paragraph and separated only with quotation marks. Like regular dialogue. (116)
	Ch 15 Punc Word Change FBE followed EWPFAE	But the whole sunlit autumn whirled, reeled and roared around her as she dragged herself . . . (222)	But the whole sunlit autumn world reeled and roared around her as she dragged herself . . . (222)	But the whole sunlit autumn world reeled and roared around her as she dragged herself . . . (116)
	Ch 15 Para Break /Space	. . . as if her feet were lined with glue. (Regular/single space) Two days later, she descended from the train . . . (223)		. . . as if her feet were lined with glue. (Double space) Two days later, she descended from the train . . . (116)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	She recognized the staring signs . . . (223)		She recognised the staring signs . . . (117)
	Ch 15 Word Change	. . . she went on hastily, with bent head, . . . (223)		. . . she walked on hastily, with bent head, . . . (117)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . Charity was shown into the office. . . . (224)		. . . Charity was shown into the office . . . (117)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . something to pick you up? . . . No. . . . Well, just lay back a minute then. . . . (225)		. . . something to pick you up? . . . No . . . Well, just lay back a minute then . . . (117)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . you’ll know better’n to fret like this. . . .” (225)		“. . . you’ll know better’n to fret like this . . .” (117)
	Ch 15 Word Ins	Charity gazed at her with widening eyes. (225)		Charity gazed back at her with widening eyes. (117)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . taken her for a miserable creature like Julia. . . . (225)		. . . taken her for a miserable creature like Julia . . . (118)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . You can stretch out right here on my sofa. . . .” (225)		“. . . You can stretch out right here on my sofa . . .” (118)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . you’re the very one to suit her, my dear. . . .” (226)		“. . . you’re the very one to suit her, my dear . . .” (118)
	Ch 15 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . but with a swift movement, Dr. Merkle edged her from . . . (226)	. . . but with a swift movement Dr. Merkle edged her from . . . (226)	. . . but with a swift movement Dr. Merkle edged her from . . . (118)
	Ch 15 Word Del	. . . she had had to borrow four dollars from her friend to pay for her railway ticket and cover the doctor’s fee. (226)		. . . she had had to borrow four dollars from her friend to pay her railway ticket and cover the doctor’s fee. (118)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	Dr. Merkle gave a short laugh which did not show her teeth, and inquired with concision . . . (226)		Dr. Merkle gave a short laugh which did not show her teeth, and enquired with concision . . . (118)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . I’ll send the bill to your folks. . . . (227)		. . . I’ll send the bill to your folks . . . (118)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	I can’t understand what you say. . . . (227)		I can’t understand what you say . . . (118)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . a girl that ain’t got enough to settle her own bills. . . .” (227)		“. . . a girl that ain’t got enough to settle her own bills . . .” (118)
	Ch 15 Word Change FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . but if you’re a mind to leave that brooch as a pledge, I don’t say no. . . . (227)	. . . but if you’ve a mind to leave that brooch as a pledge, I don’t say no. . . . (227)	. . . but if you’re a mind to leave that brooch as a pledge, I don’t say no . . . (119)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . but if you’re a mind to leave that brooch as a pledge, I don’t say no. . . . (227)		. . . but if you’re a mind to leave that brooch as a pledge, I don’t say no . . . (119)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	“. . . when you bring me my money. . . .” (227)		“. . . when you bring me my money . . .” (119)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	“Oh, thank you––good-night,” she called out . . . (228)		“Oh, thank you––good night,” she called out . . . (119)
	Ch 15 Letter Style Capital	FAE has all the letters separated with double space from the main paragraph and in a proper format of a letter. No quotation marks. The letter begins with DEAR CHARITY (229)		In FBE letters are part of a running paragraph and separated only with quotation marks. Like regular dialogue. But in this page, the letter is separated single spaced from the previous para. The letter begins with “Dear Charity” (119)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	. . . there is a hope of realizing what we dreamed . . . (229)		. . . there is a hope of realising what we dreamed . . . (120)
	Ch 15 Punc	He was not trying to evade an importunate claim; he was . . . (230)		He was not trying to evade an importunate claim: he was . . . (120)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . the indestructible figure of Annabel Balch. . . . (230)		. . . the indestructible figure of Annabel Balch . . . (120)
	Ch 15 Punc	These things were hers; they had passed into her blood, and become a part of her, they were building the child in her womb; it was impossible . . . (231)		These things were hers: they had passed into her blood, and become a part of her, they were building the child in her womb: it was impossible . . . (121)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	. . . to rummage in her drawer for a sheet of letter paper. (231)		. . . to rummage in her drawer for a sheet of letter-paper. (121)
	Ch 15 Punc	But there was none left; she must . . . (231)		But there was none left: she must . . . (121)
	Ch 15 Punc	. . . she went down to Mr. Royall’s office. (232)		. . . she went down to Mr. Royall’s office . . . (121)
	Ch 15 Word Change	. . . he had probably had his supper and walked over to Carrick Fry’s. (232)		. . . he had probably had his supper and walked down to Carrick Fry’s. (121)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv	. . . came toward her with outstretched hands. (232)		. . . came towards her with outstretched hands. (232)
	Ch 15 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . she let him take her hands in his and they stood thus, . . . (232)	. . . she let him take her hands in his, and they stood thus, . . . (232)	. . . she let him take her hands in his, and they stood thus, . . . (121)
	Ch 15 Spell Conv Punc	. . . she knew that the candle light flickering up on her white face must be distorting her swollen features . . . (233)		. . . she knew that the candlelight flickering up on her white face, must be distorting her swollen features . . . (122)
	Ch 15 Punc	. . . all the words that had been waiting had vanished. . . . (233)		. . . all the words that had been waiting had vanished. (122)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . that really expressed what she was feeling. . . . (234)		. . . that really expressed what she was feeling . . . (122)
	Ch 15 Word Ins	. . . she did not want to make things hard. (234)		. . . she did not want to make things hard for him. (122)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . but that was the very fact that held her back. . . . (234)		. . . but that was the very fact that held her back . . . (122)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . Julia Hawes’s refusal to be snatched. . . . (235)		. . . Julia Hawes’s refusal to be snatched . . . (123)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . she saw no place for her individual adventure. . . . (235)		. . . she saw no place for her individual adventure . . . (123)
	Ch 15 Word Del	. . . her figure lost its shape she knew her face would betray her. (236)		. . . her figure lost its shape her face would betray her. (123)
	Ch 15 Word Change	. . . the hemlock belt above the cemetery, and the . . . (236)		. . . the hemlock belt about the cemetery, and the . . . (123)
	Ch 15 Word Order	To the east a space of light was broadening above the forest; (236)		To the east a space broadening light was above the forest; (123)
	Ch 15 Ellipsis	. . . happen to anyone who was enclosed in it. . . . (236)		. . . happen to anyone who was enclosed in it . . . (123)
	Ch 15 Phrs Ins FBE followed EWPFAE (Except one word; see the word in bold)	At any rate it began to loom against the rainy dawn; (236)	At any rate it began to loom in her now as it loomed against the rainy dawn; (236)	At any rate it began to loom in her again as it loomed against the rainy dawn; (123)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . reach her destination without attracting notice. . . . (237)		. . . reach her destination without attracting notice . . . (124)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	. . . and the silver-gray roof slanting crookedly through the laden branches, . . . (238)		. . . and the silver-grey roof slanting crookedly through the laden branches, . . . (124)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . if already he laid such a burden on her. . . . (239)		. . . if already he laid such a burden on her . . . (125)
	Ch 16 Capital	. . . blowing down keenly from the mountain. (239)		. . . blowing down keenly from the Mountain. (125)
	Ch 16 Word Ins	. . . she was resolved to push beyond it, . . . (239)		. . . she was resolved to push on beyond it, . . . (125)
	Ch 16 Word Change	“You know, then––you’d been told?” (241)		“You knew, then––you’ve been told?” (126)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	Liff Hyatt came down. To fetch me. . . . (241)		Liff Hyatt came down. To fetch me . . . (126)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . hardly grasped what Mr. Miles was saying; the physical relief (242)		. . . hardly grasped what Mr. Miles was saying: the physical relief . . . (126)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	. . . when someone was dying. (242)		. . . when some one was dying. (126)
	Ch 16 Punc	But presently she felt her tears rise and flow down . . . (243)		But presently she felt her tears rise, and flow down . . . (127)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . and he did not insist: but after a while he said, . . . (243)		. . . and he did not insist; but after a while he said, . . . (127)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . visions of this ascent of the Mountain but she had . . . (244)		. . . visions of this ascent of the Mountain, but she had . . . (127)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . she had ever dreamed of going to New York to find him. . . . (244)		. . . she had ever dreamed of going to New York to find him . . . (127)
	Ch 16 Punc	“Left––” and they turned into a stunted pine-wood . . . (245)		“Left––,” and they turned into a stunted pine-wood . . . (128)
	Ch 16 Phrs Del	. . . and a young man slouched to the door and stood there staring. (246)		. . . and a young man slouched to the door. (128)
	Ch 16 Italicize	“Is it here?” the clergyman asked Liff in a low voice; (246)		“Is it here?” the clergyman asked Liff in a low voice; (129)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	“. . . this is where I belong. . . .” (247)		“. . . this is where I belong . . .” (129)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	“Mary’s over there,” someone said; (248)		“Mary’s over there,” some one said; (129)
	Ch 16 Punc Capital	“. . . the night before: if you don’t take and quit, I says to her . . .” (249)		“. . . the night before: ‘If you don’t take and quit’––––I says to her . . .” (130)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	She was healthier and robuster looking than the others, . . . (249)		She was healthier and robuster-looking than the others, . . . (130)
	Ch 16 Word Ins	. . . dropped down on the bench, leaning his head against the wall. (249)		. . . dropped down on to the bench, leaning his head against the wall. (130)
	Ch 16 Word Change	. . . with lips parted in a frozen gasp above the broken teeth. (250)		. . with lips parted in a frozen gap above the broken teeth. (131)
	Ch 16 Punc Word Change	“. . . Where’d we get one here, I’d like ter know?” (250)		“. . . Where’d we get one here I’d like to know?” (131)
	Ch 16 Verb Agr	“. . . them that has it sleeps better,” an old woman murmured. (250-251)		“. . . them that has it sleep better,” an old woman murmured. (131)
	Ch 16 Phrase Del	. . . said the lank-haired man, on the defensive. (251)		. . . said the lank-haired man. (131)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . though he were dead, yet shall he live. . . . (251)		. . . though he were dead, yet shall he live . . . (131)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis Word Change	Though after my skin worms destroy my body, yet in my flesh shall I see God. . . . (251)		Though after my skin worms destroy this body, yet in my flesh shall I see God . . . (131)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . she had drawn the stocking. . . . (251)		. . . she had drawn the stocking . . . (131)
	Ch 16 Phrs Ins Word Change	. . . and we shall take nothing out of it––––” (251)		. . . and it is certain we can carry nothing out––––” (131)
	Ch 16 Word Change	. . . said the elderly man with lank hair, . . . (252)		. . . burst out the elderly man with lank hair, . . . (131)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	“. . . n’I got a right to take it outer here . . . n’I’ll lick any feller says I ain’t. . . .” (252)		“. . . n’I got a right to take it outer here . . . n’I’ll lick any feller says I ain’t . . .” (132)
	Ch 16 Punc	“Sit down, damn you!” shouted the tall youth . . . (252)		“Sit down, damn you,” shouted the tall youth . . . (132)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis Word Change	“G’wan, minister . . . don’t let. ’em faze you. . . .” (252)		“G’won, minister . . . don’t let’em faze you . . .” (132)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . the first-fruits of them that slept. . . . (252)		. . the first-fruits of them that slept . . . (132)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . in the twinkling of an eye, at the last trump. . . . (252)		. . . in the twinkling of an eye, at the last trump. . . . (132)
	Ch 16 Word Form	So when this corruption shall have put on incorruption, . . . (252-253)		So when this corruptible shall have put on incorruption, . . . (132)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis Capital	“. . . Death is swallowed up in Victory. . . .” (253)		“. . . Death is swallowed up in victory . . .” (132)
	Ch 16 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	The young man on the bench who . . . (253)	The young man on the bench, who . . . (253)	The young man on the bench, who . . . (123)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . the coat slipped to the floor, revealing the poor body . . . (253)		. . . the coat slipped to the floor revealing the poor body . . . (253)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	. . . on a ridge of upheaved earth over which they . . . (254)		. . . on a ridge of up-heaved earth over which they . . . (133)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . to live and is full of misery. . . . (254)		. . . to live and is full of misery . . . (133)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis	. . . he fleeth as it were a shadow. . . . (254)		. . . he fleeth as it were a shadow . . . (133)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	Someone bent over and pulled out . . . (254-255)		Some one bent over and pulled out . . . (133)
	Ch 16 Capital	His great mercy to take unto Himself the soul of . . . (255)		His great mercy to take unto himself the soul of . . . (133)
	Ch 16 Phrs Order	. . . he muttered, spitting into his palm and passing his ragged shirt-sleeve across his perspiring face. (255)		. . . he muttered, passing his ragged shirt-sleeve across his perspiring face and spitting into his palm. (133)
	Ch 16 Capital	“. . . it may be like unto His glorious body, . . . He is able to subdue all things unto Himself . . .” (255)		“. . . it may be like unto his glorious body, . . . he is able to subdue all things unto himself . . .” (133)
	Ch 16 Spell Conv	. . . his shoulder blades still heaving with the effort. (255)		. . . his shoulder-blades still heaving with the effort. (255)
	Ch 16 Punc Ellipsis	“. . . Christ have mercy upon us, Lord have mercy upon us. . . .” (255)		“. . . Christ, have mercy upon us, Lord, have mercy upon us . . .” (134)
	Ch 16 Punc	Mr. Miles knelt, too. (256)		Mr. Miles knelt too. (134)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . he said, and he began: “Our Father . . .” (256)		. . . he said; and he began: “Our Father . . .” (134)
	Ch 16 Punc	. . . when he ended, the lank-haired man flung himself . . . (256)		. . . when he ended the lank-haired man flung himself . . . (134)
	Ch 16 Punc	Her mournful withered face was not unkind, and Charity went up to her. (257)		Her mournful withered face was not unkind and Charity went up to her. (134)
	Ch 16 Ellipsis Capital	“It’s the girl from lawyer Royall’s––Mary’s girl . . . you remember. . . .” (257)		“It’s the girl from Lawyer Royall’s––Mary’s girl . . . you remember . . .” (134)
	Ch 17 Word Ins FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . very soul seemed to be sucked into it. (258)	. . . very soul seemed to be sucked up into it. (258)	. . . very soul seemed to be sucked up into it. (136)
	Ch 17 Word Ins FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . as if the height of the heavens divided them. (259)	. . . as if the height of the heavens had divided them. (259)	. . . as if the height of the heavens divided them. (136)
	Ch 17 Word Del	. . . they seemed to be herded together in a sort of passive promiscuity . . . (259)		. . . they seemed herded together in a sort of passive promiscuity . . . (136)
	Ch 17 Spell Conv	. . . girl who had apostrophized her in such strange words. (259)		. . . girl who had apostrophised her in such strange words. (137)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	“ . . . She’d have given her to anybody. . . .” (260)		“ . . . She’d have given her to anybody . . .” (137)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	. . . sprung up then and there and fled away. . . . (260)		. . . sprung up then and there and fled away . . . (137)
	Ch 17 Word Del	. . . the night dragged themselves slowly by, and at last the sky . . . (260)		. . . the night dragged slowly by, and at last the sky . . . (137)
	Ch 17 Word Change	. . . the light gradually spreading across the wintry world, . . . (260)		. . . the light gradually spreading across a wintry world, . . . (137)
	Ch 17 Sent Ins	. . . she would find some quiet place where she could bear her child, and give it to decent people to keep; (261)		. . . she would manage to borrow a small sum from the faithful Ally, and find some quiet place where she could bear her child, and give it to decent people to keep; (137)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	. . . to the nest of misery on the Mountain. . . . (261)		. . . to the nest of misery on the Mountain . . . (138)
	Ch 17 Word Change	It was one of the dainty things on which she had squandered her savings, . . . (262)		It was one of the pretty things on which she had squandered her savings, . . . (138)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	. . . across the floor lifted the latch and went out. . . . (262)		. . . across the floor lifted the latch and went out . . . (138)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	The morning was icy cold and a pale sun was just . . . (262)		The morning was icy cold and a pale autumn sun was just . . . (138)
	Ch 17 Word Change	The houses scattered on the hillside lay cold and smokeless . . . (262)		The houses scattered on the hillside lay black and smokeless . . . (138)
	Ch 17 Word Change FBE followed EWPFAE	Charity walked across the field to the ground. (263)	Charity walked across the field to the mound. (263)	Charity walked across the field to the mound. (138)
	Ch 17 Punc	But everything beyond was darkness. (264)		But everything beyond was darkness . . . (139)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	As she continued to climb the air grew keener, . . . (264)		As she continued to climb the hill the air grew keener, . . . (139)
	Ch 17 Word Change	She bent her shoulders and struggled on against it . . . (264)		She bent her shoulders and struggled against it . . . (139)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	. . . the Mountain falling away to infinite distances. (264)		. . . the Mountain falling away at her feet to infinite distances. (139)
	Ch 17 Spell Conv	. . . have divided her forever from her short dream of bliss. (264)		. . . have divided her for ever from her short dream of bliss. (139)
	Ch 17 Punc Sent Change Ellipsis	. . . only one sensation had the weight of reality; it was the bodily burden of her child. But for it she would have felt as rootless as whiffs of thistledown the wind blew past her. Her child was like a load that held her down, and yet like a hand hat pulled her to her feet. She said to herself that she must get up and struggle on. . . . (264-265)		. . . only one sensation had the weight of reality: it was the bodily burden of her child. That was an anchor holding her to earth; but for it she would have felt as rootless as whiffs of thistledown the wind blew past her. Her child was like a load that held her down, and yet like a hand hat pulled her to her feet. She said to herself that she must get up and struggle on . . . (139)
	Ch 17 Word Del	. . . the gaunt build of the old horse pressing forward with lowered head; (265)		. . . the build of the old horse pressing forward with lowered head; (139)
	Ch 17 Spell Conv	. . . after a moment she recognized the heavy bulk of the man who held the reins. (265)		. . . after a moment she recognised the heavy bulk of the man who held the reins. (139)
	Ch 17 Word Del	Her first impulse was to crouch down under the ledge till he had passed; (265)		Her first impulse was to crouch under the ledge till he had passed; (140)
	Ch 17 Spell Conv	. . . the relief of feeling that someone was near her . . . (265)		. . . the relief of feeling that some one was near her . . . (140)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	Mr. Royall saw her, and touched the horse with the whip. (265)		Mr. Royall saw her, and touched the horse’s shoulder with the whip. (140)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	. . . they began to jog back toward Hamblin. (266)		. . . they began to jog back along the trail toward Hamblin. (140)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	“Get along there, Dan. . . . (266)		“Get along there, Dan . . . (140)
	Ch 17 Punc	. . . I brought hum along pretty quick, and . . . (266)		. . . I brought hum along pretty quick and . . . (140)
	Ch 17 Punc	“. . . it was such a good job, either.” (267)		“. . . it was such a good job either.” (140)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	“Yes, I do,” she murmured, looking straight ahead of her. (267)		“Yes, I do,” she murmured, still looking straight ahead of her. (140)
	Ch 17 Sent Del	She continued to look straight ahead. Tears of weariness and weakness were dimming her eyes and beginning to run over, . . . (267)		Tears of weariness and weakness were dimming her eyes and beginning to run over, . . . (140-141)
	Ch 17 Word Ins	They drove in silence, following the long loops . . . (267)		They drove on in silence, following the long loops . . . (141)
	Ch 17 Word Change	Then he let the reins droop on the dashboard . . . (267)		Then he let the reins drop on the dashboard . . . (141)
	Ch 17 Sent Ins	She roused herself from her apathetic musing. “The train––what train?” (268)		She roused herself from her apathetic musing. “The train––what train?” She thought she had not understood. (141)
	Ch 17 Punc	He was standing on the other side of the table looking at her kindly and gravely; (269)		He was standing on the other side of the table, looking at her kindly and gravely; (142)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	. . . but I want to be now. . . . (270)		. . . but I want to be now . . . (142)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	“No . . . it’s not all. . . .” (270)		“No . . . it’s not all . . .” (142)
	Ch 17 Ellipsis	“. . . let him take it easy the rest of the way. . . .” (271)		“. . . let him take it easy the rest of the way . . .” (143)
	Ch 17 Word Change FBE followed EWPFAE	She followed him out of the house, and then walked across the yard to the shed, where the horse was tied. (272)	She followed him out of the house, and they walked across the yard to the shed, where the horse was tied. (272)	She followed him out of the house, and they walked across the yard to the shed where the horse was tied. (143)
	Ch 17 Punc	. . . walked across the yard to the shed, where the horse was tied. (272)		. . . walked across the yard to the shed where the horse was tied. (143)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis	. . . even these things grew dim to her. . . . (273)		. . . even these things grew dim to her . . . (144)
	Ch 18 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . the landscape those fervid hours had faded, too. (274)	. . . the landscape those fervid hours had faded too. (274)	. . . the landscape those fervid hours had faded too. (144)
	Ch 18 Punc Spell Conv	. . . she was the being who had lived them; she was someone . . . (274)		. . . she was the being who had lived them: she was some one . . . (144)
	Ch 18 Word Ins Punc	He filled her cup and plate and whenever she lifted her eyes . . . (275)		He filled her cup and her plate, and whenever she lifted her eyes . . . (145)
	Ch 18 Spell Conv	. . . as of someone hateful and obstructive, but whom she could . . . (275)		. . . as of some one hateful and obstructive, but whom she could . . . (145)
	Ch 18 Word Ins Word Del	Only once, on the day of the Old Home Week celebration, while the stray fragments of his address drifted across her troubled mind . . . (275)		Only once, when, on the day of the Old Home Week celebration, the stray fragments of his address drifted across her troubled mind . . . (145)
	Ch 18 Punc	. . . she had supposed herself to be living that even through the burning mist . . . (275)		. . . she had supposed herself to be living, that even through the burning mist . . . (145)
	Ch 18 Punc	. . . together to a house covered with creepers and standing next . . . (276)		. . . together to a house covered with creepers, and standing next . . . (145)
	Ch 18 Punc	As he turned and faced Charity, she noticed that . . . (276-277)		As he turned and faced Charity she noticed that . . . (146)
	Ch 18 Punc	. . . her hands folded on her knee till the clergyman returned. (277)		. . . her hands folded on her knee, till the clergyman returned. (146)
	Ch 18 Punc	. . . that had the same dread sound of finality: (278)		. . . that had the same dread sound of finality . . . (146)
	Ch 18 Word Change	“. . . any impediment whereby ye may not be lawfully joined together . . .” (278)		“. . . any impediment why ye may not be lawfully joined together . . .” (146)
	Ch 18 Word Del FBE did not follow EWPFAE	. . . to understand the gestures that the clergy man was signaling to her . . . (278)	. . . to understand the gestures the clergy man was signaling to her . . . (278)	. . . to understand the gestures that the clergy man was signaling to her . . . (146)
	Ch 18 Punc Word Ins Spell Conv FBE followed EWPFAE (Only difference is the space between “on” and “to”)	It lay enclosed in his strong palm and she felt a ring that was too big for her being slipped on her thin finger. (278)	It lay enclosed in his strong palm, and she felt a ring that was too big for her being slipped onto her thin finger. (278)	It lay enclosed in his strong palm, and she felt a ring that was too big for her being slipped on to her thin finger. (147)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis Para Break /Space	She understood then that she was married. . . . (Regular/single space) Late that afternoon . . . (278)		She understood then that she was married . . . (Double space) Late that afternoon . . . (147)
	Ch 18 Word Form	. . . It was a large engraving with a dazzling white margin . . . (279)		. . . It was a large engraving with a dazzlingly white margin . . . (147)
	Ch 18 Spell Conv	. . . the first time to a realization of what she had done. (280)		. . . the first time to a realisation of what she had done. (147)
	Ch 18 Word Ins FBE did not follow EWPFAE	He went up to the window to draw the blind, and putting . . . (281)	He went up to the window to draw down the blind, and putting . . . (281)	He went up to the window to draw the blind, and putting . . . (148)
	Ch 18 Punc	Oh, what have I done?” she whispered, shuddering to her pillow; (283)		Oh, what have I done?” she whispered shuddering to her pillow; (149)
	Ch 18 Punc FBE did not follow EWPFAE	Oh, what have I done?” she whispered, shuddering to her pillow; (283)	Oh, what have I done?” she whispered, shuddering, to her pillow; (283)	Oh, what have I done?” she whispered shuddering to her pillow; (149)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis	. . . shaking at every footstep that approached. . . . (283)		. . . shaking at every footstep that approached . . . (149)
	Ch 18 Spell Conv	A faint sound had told her that someone was in the room; (283)		A faint sound had told her that some one was in the room; (149)
	Ch 18 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	. . . and in the darkness outlined against the grey square of the window, . . . (283)	. . . and in the darkness, outlined against the grey square of the window, . . . (283)	. . . and in the darkness, outlined against the grey square of the window, . . . (149)
	Ch 18 Phrs Ins	He knew, then . . . he knew . . . it was because he knew that he had married her, and that he sat there in the darkness to show her she was safe with him. (284)		He knew, then . . . he knew . . . he had married her because he knew that, and it was because he knew that he sat there in the darkness to show her she was safe with him. (149)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis Para Break /Space	. . . she let her head sink on the pillow. . . . (Regular/single space) When she woke the room was full of morning light, . . . (284)		. . . she let her head sink on the pillow . . . (Double space) When she woke the room was full of morning light, . . . (149)
	Ch 18 Punc FBE followed EWPFAE	A few minutes later Charity went out, too. (285)	A few minutes later Charity went out too. (285)	A few minutes later Charity went out too. (150)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis	“I thought . . . you said it was five dollars a visit. . . .” (286)		“I thought . . . you said it was five dollars a visit . . .” (150)
	Ch 18 Italicize	“For you, as a favour––I did. (287)		“For you, as a favour––I did. (151)
	Ch 18 Punc Italicize FBE followed EWPFAE	But how about the responsibility and the insurance? (287)	But how about the responsibility––and the insurance? (287)	But how about the responsibility––and the insurance? (151)
	Ch 18 Capital	. . . up to the ’Piscopal church; I heard all about the wedding . . . (287)		. . . up to the ’piscopal church; I heard all about the wedding . . . (151)
	Ch 18 Ellipsis	. . . catching up the brooch fled out of the room and the house. . . . (288)		. . . catching up the brooch fled out of the room and the house . . . (152)
	Ch 18 Capital	. . . in the direction of the post office, and go in through . . . (288)		. . . in the direction of the Post Office, and go in through . . . (152)
	Ch 18 Capital	. . . dipped the rusty post office pen in ink. (288)		. . . dipped the rusty Post Office pen in ink. (288)
	Ch 18 Letter Style	. . . on the sheet of paper she wrote: I’m married to Mr. Royall. . . (289)		. . . on the sheet of paper she wrote: “I’m married to Mr. Royall. . .” (159)
	Ch 18 Word Ins Punc	Now that there was no chance of ever seeing Harney again, why should she not tell him the truth? (289)		Now that there was no chance of her ever seeing Harney again why should she not tell him the truth? (152)

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